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A dream
I awaken
in a field
Green, lush
A little blurry
Like water in my eyes
I stand
Look around
See a well
Stone, decaying wooden roof
I stare into the depths
Just black, no water
Ominous feeling
Noises like animals
Angry noises
Noises I don’t like
I slowly inch away
I can’t run
No one hears me
Its still light out
My vision clears
I see water
Glimmering,
I walk
What seemed a great distants
Now at my feet
Like I blacked out
The pool
Rectangular, deep, gray like concrete
Blue water
can’t see the bottom
looks inviting
Huge flowers in neat rows on either side of the pool
Voices?
singing
laughter
I notice girls
All around
Colors
Blue pink green
Reminds me of the flowers
They speak to me
They tell me many secrets
Can’t remember
Shown to a large temple
white domed roof pillars no doors
open like a giant pavilion
there’s an enigma in this place
large pedestal
one book very large many pages
I open the book
I search
there’s only one page with righting on it
it tells me the greatest secret
on the tip of my tongue
i can tell its important
mabey the key
to everything
screaming
distracted
sounds like the girls
I rush to see what is happening
Its getting dark
Sunset
I cant understand
What’s happening
I see something
Something not nice
Something that doesn’t like pretty things
All the girls are gone
Flowers are lit like they have candles in them
Maybe girls are inside
I run
I have to get away
I hear the noises
The animals Noises
The Angry ones
The ones I don’t like
I can’t go fast enough
They catch me
I see fur like a bear
Shaped like a man
Broad shoulders
Claws teeth eyes
Many faces
Circling me
Surrounding me
Trapped
Noises like laughing
Not happy laughing
Mean, angry, cruel
I want to get away
I need out
Scared
On the ground
Can’t escape
They get closer
Drawing in
like a huge trap made of fur and claws
inche by inche they get closer
slow methoudical
so close I can smell them
smells musty, old, dead
there inches away now
so close
i could be cut to peaces
by there sheer incessant circling alone
they all stop
they wait
they laugh
and they lunge
I wake.
- by unknownartist |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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Comments (6 Comments)
- lejit00 - 10/29/2008
- interesting to say the least.....nice use of languge too.
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- dvskmaiden - 10/28/2008
- Ive never known how scary but exciting other peoples dreams can be AMAZING
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- Goldenthyrsus - 07/17/2008
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it love the way u descride it! i could picture the whole thing and that it sometimes hard for a writer to do.
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- Delusional Kiss - 07/17/2008
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Scary~ But cool - Report As Spam
- Blood Of a Demonic Angel - 07/17/2008
- wow that was really good how you describided it
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- OutOfThinAir - 07/17/2008
- Wow, thats kind of frightening, but cool and interesting! You described it well!
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