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Ever been to deer park? It's not real, but still, it's sounds fun. With dark green slopes with large willow trees. Maybe it is real? Do we know? Maybe it won't look as nice as it says it does in my storybook. But it could? Couldn't it? My story won't change, so I guess that means Deer Park doesn't exist... But, if it was a park, would you go there, if I said there was no bugs, and all the animals are kind, as well as the grass doesn't make you scratch? Would you?
My momma says it just doesn't exist, because it doesn't, but maybe, somehow, she's wrong! Maybe I'm right. Cause, I have seen it.
You can go there. As well as live there!
There is a lake, named Rabbit pool, and there is the Frog pond, and the lovely fish swim around your feet and suck you toes. Near the end of the park (Which you can always tell!) The grass starts to get longer, til it is taller than I!I'm 4'5'', That's were I play hide and go seek with all the lovely deer, and moles, and even the frogs! I always lose. But isn't that the fun?
I always lower my voice when I get to this part about the park.
There is a bridge...A lovely stone bridge. It's not made by humans. Far to big! It is as tall as a 5 story building! It's made by giants. There is also a tree. Far to big to be for humans! It is larger than cities! New York, Paris! Far bigger!But, the little houses in the tree are the size of normal houses. I hope to climb someday, but i don't think I can....
If you can find that bridge you can find me...
- Title: Deer Park
- Artist: Jayy Bird
- Description: It might be a good idea after you read this to go to my journal, and read that. This is not any part of my story there, but this is a good background. You will understand where the little girl is, the little girls name her, is Fire or Vaneita
- Date: 09/14/2008
- Tags: deerpark wonder notreal willow
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Comments (2 Comments)
- S P I C E Y Y - 09/17/2008
- Wow, I loved the end, and how you made the type get smaller. I will go read your story in your jornal!
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- Jayy Bird - 09/16/2008
- Comment I want to know what I did wrong!
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