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Lizzy woke up when she looked at the clock it was ten o'clock she was late ,again, she hurried to get dressed. she ran to her dresser and got on her crash bracelets. Lizzy looked around for her belly sensor that would tell her hoverboard where her center of gravity was. she finally found it under her bed.
"Aren't your friends coming over to get you for the tournament?" asked her sister who just walked in "your hoverboard is done charging in the back yard..." lizzy adjusted her belly sensor and ran past her sister.
"Why didn't you wake me up earlier may?" she yelled as she ran down the stairs. her hoverboard was floating in the backyard. It's solar panels where beginning to fold to the grippy metallic gold riding surface. her hoverboard looked just like a surf board but it was designed to ride the air instead of water. She slipped into her grippy shoes so she wouldn't fall off the board and jumped on just as her friends flew over her fence on there own hoverboards. one of them jumped off and stood by her side laughing.
"Nice outfit!" he pointed at her. when Lizzy noticed she freaked out. she was wearing her pajama pants and her blue hair was still frizzled. "go change we will wait"
"Ah! i will be right back you better keep the guys here, Tom!" Lizzy ran up the stairs past May she changed into some blue-grey pants and tied her hair up so it wouldn't get in her face when hoverboarding. she looked out her window into her backyard and saw the guys sitting on their hoverboards and smiled when she saw David. Lizzy ran downstairs and jumped onto her board witch was closest to the back door "hey lets go!!!!"
- by D00dlebugg |
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- | Submitted on 10/19/2008 |
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- Title: Hectic morning
- Artist: D00dlebugg
- Description: it is kind of short but it works i always right so i wanted to see how everyone liked my writing
- Date: 10/19/2008
- Tags: hectic morning
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Comments (7 Comments)
- D00dlebugg - 10/24/2008
- i juess it is a fan fiction...
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- FASSlVE MAGGOT - 10/19/2008
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I agree with Asaki Yoshida. This is almost identical to the Uglies series.
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- D00dlebugg - 10/19/2008
- okay you peoplez if you want to read more i will add some more in my jurnal occasionaly
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- xMiiihx3 - 10/19/2008
- (: write some more please..
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- chaotic_cat13 - 10/19/2008
- ok, this is like the "Uglies" series by Scott Westerfeld...in fact it's a lot like the Uglies series...
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- ame teh numph - 10/19/2008
- could work on your punctuation a bit more, but other then that it was good
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- MrsMileyJonas - 10/19/2008
- Wow I like it its interesting are you gonna write some more?
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