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Monster World The Prologue
Here's a little something from my story "Monster World" "the Prologue"
For as long has their been humanity so has there been stories of creature's known as Monsters of legend, but thats just what they were. Old ghost stories used to frighten children. But what they didn't know was that monsters are real. Far away from Earth was a planet called "Monstra", an Earth-like planet with hundreds of strange monsters, most were smart and friendly, while others were mean and visious. Monstra was truely a beautiful world however, it wasn't always so peaceful.
A terrible war almost consumed their world and an mysterious evil man named stripes was the cause of it. The war ended swiftly as stripes was killed in battle. Time passed and monstra was at peace again however, a shadow of the past threaten to tip that balance once again. Oddly enough, it all started with the arrival of a girl named "sarah".
- by clayman0302 |
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- | Submitted on 10/24/2008 |
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- Title: Monster World the prologue
- Artist: clayman0302
- Description: A story i hope will one day influence the imaginations of children every where.
- Date: 10/24/2008
- Tags: monster world prologue
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Maestroshnitzel - 03/12/2010
- Okay, this would be good for a childrens' book, but remember to capitalize names and other proper nouns, such as "Monstra". and check your spelling. Other than that, great.
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- angel of fortune - 07/28/2009
- Awww. I'm commenting, i was actualy gonna tell you that you spelt viscious wrong lol sorry, and that i love the stripes sort of thing lol. No i can't spell but yeah. I am writing a story, and you may class me as a child but whatever, i like your story, it sounds good.
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- clayman0302 - 03/14/2009
- Sigh, nobody commented on it at all. How disapointing.
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