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onces apon a time there were 2 women and 3 men...they all were freind and helped each other out.they were in college and was planning to go to a trip on summer...ben who bought a car said that they should go in his van and they argree...as they were traveling to a beach that was 50miles away they decided to rent a apartment for 5 days.. they drove and drove till they saw a motel that said empty motel.. they enter it and rent it so they all took their're
stuff out of the truck and went to they're room and threw their suitcases and stuff on the ground. soon kody said "hey did u guy hear that" then sarah said"hear what?"kody said"i heard a loud thump" everyone was laughing but not kody!!! "ahahaha" said chase you think it a ghost or what "hahahaha" and heather said " it is your imagination".... then there were a loud "thump thump thump" the sound came closer and closer then it stop... they all look in to the hall way and saw a little girl with long hair that cover her face and looking down...... everyone was shock sa they all went to sleep in ben van.... the next morning they woke up and kody was gone... they search the motel and saw blood tract everwhere....they all was in a fright so they all paked they're stuff and opean the door but the door slam loudly"baam" it sliced chase hand and chase yeld"ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!"then sarah searched the closest and saw kody body twisted badly...."stop that who ever you are"ben yelled and a voice of a girl laugter"hehehehhe is it funny now" "no it not " said heather.. "if u help me find my body i will not kill u heheheh"said the ghost in the hall.. "ok" said everyone..they search and search and cannot find it untill that night ben came up with a idea that were the body might be at..they searched the motel in the inside and outside and found nothing till a heather waled on top a wood"squeak" they all open the wood and saw lots of bodies!!!! "sarah heather find the girl body quikly"ben said then ben searched to "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh"heather scream then a silence fell ben looked at were heather was but she was gone then sarah saw the girl body and said ben to come and take the body to the motel..ben took the body and said to the little girl that they found here body then ben and sarah drove off to college and heard the scream of the motel manager scream"ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh"
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- by master minoto |
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- | Submitted on 11/01/2008 |
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- Title: ghost thats in the hall
- Artist: master minoto
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Description:
there are 5 people 2 women 3 men!! they will find the truth about the ghost thats in the hall...
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kody,sarah,heather,chase,and ben - Date: 11/01/2008
- Tags: ghost hall
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Comments (2 Comments)
- sasori of the red sand 34 - 02/15/2009
- its ok
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- Clapper Cheeks - 02/09/2009
- Eh... It's ok... kinda hard to read.. Also, don't start it with Once Upon a TIme.... sounds like a fairytail like that
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