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CHAPTER 1
THe door swung open and a figure suffled in and sat down at the corner table. He didn't take off his cloak that he was wearing. The barmaid sees him and walkes over,"Hey there sweetie, may I get you something?"
"No."The strangers voice rings out,"I'm looking for some people, have you seen them?"
All activity in the bar stops as he stood up and pulled out a few sheafs of paper,"Beware. These people are dangerous. Especially this one."He points at a picture of a pink haired girl,"Call the number if you've seen any one of these people." He pulls his hood down. His hair is red and he has blue eyes," Don't hurt them. They are valuable..." With that, he walks out and vanishes into the night.
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The sun is bright and the stream ran clear and deep. The sounds of voices ring out.
"Link, stop it! Your going to fall!" A girl screamed.
"So? Come, it's not dangerous!" The boy named Link called.
"I'm coming up! Hurry! I want a turn!" Another girl calls.
At the mouth of the river, a boy stood on a teetering log, prepared to jump. Two girls were in the water, watching him.
"Sofie, look Blaze is doing it! Are you a chicken?" Link laughs.
Sofie titters then both girls scream. Link had just jumped and had splashed them with water. he bobs up grinning and spitting out water.
"My turn! My turn!" The girl named Blaze runs up and balanced on the log. She prepares to jump and the log tips. She falls onto a belly flop and comes up laughing in pain.
"oww...how come you do it well?"She demands.
"uh...good luck?"link said quickly.
"Your dead, link!" Blaze jumps at Link and hods him underwater and brings him up," Who's your master?"She shakes him.
"Ha ha! not you."This remark earned him another dunk. The girl named Sofie swims out and shakes dog like. A shot rings out, and the trio falls silent.
"What was that?"Blaze says sharply.
"I dunno."Link replies.
"Lets go." muttered Sofie, eyeing the forest.
- by Commando Axton |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 02/08/2009 |
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- Title: Experiments
- Artist: Commando Axton
- Description: This is called Experiments. Its based on a RP in gaia. This is their story as they are hunted down. [[it does not follow the storyline!!!]]
- Date: 02/08/2009
- Tags: experiments
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Comments (6 Comments)
- R0bot0 - 06/03/2009
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I have the Zelda series downloaded in my comp, but I've never bothered looking at it XD
Good story! I like it. It's definitely not crap. - Report As Spam
- Overlord Tabious - 02/23/2009
- Its not bad at all,its actually very good.Don't be to hard on yourself.
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- Commando Axton - 02/20/2009
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cool. I havent seen it yet but Im gonna! ~tabious
im not a good writer. I think this is crap...Im harsh... - Report As Spam
- Overlord Tabious - 02/09/2009
- Not bad Aero013!You do a good job at writing!I'm thinking of writing a story too!
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- Commando Axton - 02/08/2009
- The legend of Zelda series. He's the hero of the story...[[i loves him. lol]]
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- Fayne Darkness - 02/08/2009
- Not bad not bad. Where did you get the name Link? XD
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