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chapter one
new york, usa
1/19/2290
ever scince the year 2027 we have been at war with the other countrys....well if ure reading this from the past the other countrys are now america yes thats right were basicly fighting ourseves out here...literally for in the year 1967 scientists were trying to make clones over a hundred years later they succeded but only to find out that the clones were only for war purposes. they attacked the U.S. and won within a month they took texas,california and canada. scince then weve been fighting back we had started to weaken thre numbers but they found out how to clone them selves this is where i come into the story for you see every kid in america and round the world that wasnt a clone was immidietly sent into the army........im 14 years old and this is my stroy.
"get into the bunker. hurry move it private"said the srgt. of our squad the squad consist of me, my sister salena, dean mcloud (a close friend) and some other kids we havent seen til this morning at the camp, and of course srgt. gudfreid hes the meanest of the mean you miss a shot he shoots at you...well thats what we heard "get into the bunker hu..." "MAN DOWN MAN DOWN" "MEDIC" srgt was shot before our eyes we might have only met him this morning to but he was the only thing we had to a father here at war with ourselfs. "come on guys get in the bunker the medics wont come unless we get these flee bags to flee or to have them all die"said dean after getting off the radio of the srgt dead body trying to call a medic "dean your one to talk get in this friggin bunker and get on that machine gun your the machine gun speacilaist" "yea without dean on that gun we cant holdem off without it"said my sister trying to keep calm after seeing her first person killed in war panicing to not die here without me. "salena get that radio and get back in here keep low and call for an air strike, john get me some cordinates for the strike if you dont get it right were all dead" "who made you the boss im older"said john whos older only by a year we used to be best friends but we got into a fight a day before the news that we were being sent to war. "i have more experience then all of you i might not be good in school but that dosent mean anything here all of us here are only privates now you wanna stay the private you are or you wanna show that just cause were kids dosent mean they should look down on us now get me those cordinates" he stiffned up and grabed the binoculars just as salena got back with the radio."good work sis, ok rest of you hold them fleebags up we dont want them to inter fear with john. danieal you and some kids go and get some more fire power" "alright.........srgt."he held up his hand in military salute and put it down then took 3 kids and went to get help. "i got the cordnates" said john"good salena tell the fly boys the cordnates as john tells them to you" "ok"said salena still a bit shaken. i grabed both her shoulders and said "dont worry before you know it this war will be over and we'll be back home with our mom and our dad in no time now calm down and keep sharp i dont want to lose you to a sniper...........speaking of which" i grabed a near by sniper gun attached with a thermal scope and climbed a latter to a small room with a 1 big line window in the wall dean on one side shooting with a grin on his face not careing if he hit a tree or a clone "dean are you even aiming" "so thats what this little grove in the metals for haha just kidding i heard you coming" "ok, dont watse your ammo reinforcements arent here yet" i went to the window and looked through the scope "yo dean you get shot at really close yet?" "hell yea its was so close i think i might have a scar on my face haha" "where did it shoot from?" "northeast in the ruins of the house up there second floor" "of course" i pointed the gun in the direction of the house to see that what i was looking at was myslef waving holding the same exact gun. i didnt hesitate i took the first chance i had and got a head shot "nice shot man" "thank but we still have to get..............."the bombs started falling from the sky. the clones that were smart enough to get out the moment they saw the planes probable made it the rest didnt. "WOOOO HOOOOOOOO" me and dean went down the ladder as fast as we could "nice job john, and salena" "thanks man" "thanks bro" we waited a couple of minutes before dan came back with an army of 15 guys with him "dude were have you been" "we got trapped it seems that your air strike took out an enemy tank that was keeping us held up if you didnt call that in we would have never made it. but we have to report 6 casultys." "why six?"said john "five of our men didnt make it the tank took them by surprise"befor dan could say the 6th casuilty i said "the sixth one was srgt" when the medics checked him he had a shot in his head.... he didnt make it. when the medic who were adults saw how we did and how i lead them they made me srgt. of the group and made the rest corprals.
end of chapter one.
- by sharker345 |
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- | Submitted on 02/19/2009 |
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- Title: brothers amung the dead ch.1
- Artist: sharker345
- Description: this is a war story i made up i got the idea for it after beating call of duty big red one a bunch of times (not showing off) and after listening to like toy soliders by eminem. if you like it the rest is in my journal im looking for anyone that wants to join the story they can just ask and if its a yes ill comment or pm u back plz rate 5/5 thx
- Date: 02/19/2009
- Tags: brothers amung dead
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Comments (6 Comments)
- sharker345 - 02/28/2009
- yea i know its weird XD
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- kidreaper345 - 02/28/2009
- your welcome by the way i think its ironic how we both have 345 as the last part of our usernames
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- sharker345 - 02/28/2009
- thnx man
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- kidreaper345 - 02/28/2009
- this is a good story only thing wrong is the typing mistakes besides tht its a 5/5 anyway
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- gir_invaders - 02/21/2009
- It has a good plot line. All it needs is description and a really big grammar check. Other than those two, it has a good plot line. biggrin
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- sharker345 - 02/19/2009
- come on pple leave comments.....plz
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