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Preface
In the time before time when life had just begun in the universe, there was a peaceful island called Far-Eden. It was located in the great sea of an unnamed planet. Its villagers lived humbly, living in separate areas of the island, each named after the characteristics of the area. The icy, cold, snow-covered Northmoutians, The steamy Southjungle, the wide open spaces of the Westplains, and the wide sand dunes of the Eastdesert. In the middle of these areas however, there was a place called Peacevalley. It was always green and full of life. Its four sides were covered by each of the four regions. For many years Peacevalley remained untouched by the villagers, for they believed that it was sacred to the three So-Lar gods, after the three suns that orbited the planet. This is how it was until villagers who were down on their luck, began to settle in Peacevalley. Everything went well, people were prospering and still allowing the land of Peacevalley and its creatures to live long and prosper. That is until one day, a large beam of light shattered the sky and it crashed into the Northmoutians, no one knew where it came from, but the villagers from the Northmoutians were never heard from again. Everyone became worried, but after awhile the fear went away and life in Peacevalley and the rest of Far-Eden went back to normal. Not long after everything began to settle down, a strange mechanical being named Addonexus climbed over the snowy peaks of the Northmountains and called the land of Far-Eden his own. He flicked wrist blades out and began to fire upon the villagers homes with glowing green energy. They all erupted into flames and exploded, the extinction of the villagers was inevitable. Addonexus was a one being killing machine; he destroyed entire cities with a flick of his wrist, and burned down miles of the Southjungle within seconds. Addonexus hunted the villagers down until he had killed every last one. When the deed was done, three rays of light shined through the smog that Addonexus had created with the burning cities and the light entombed him in unbreakable stone. The stone was forced through the surface of the earth into an enormous, underground cave where a shrine was waiting for the stone coffin to be placed. This is where Addonexus would rest until the end of days……
- Title: The Awakening
- Artist: lookeoj
- Description: the intro for the book im writing for school, tell me what you think.
- Date: 05/29/2009
- Tags: awakening addnoexus lookeoj
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Comments (1 Comments)
- XxInnocent-FearxX - 06/01/2009
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I think its very nice~
I give you a 5
ANd its very well thought story~ - Report As Spam