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My mother.... who would kill her? I stared at the bloodied corpse. It was shocking and gruesome to even look at. I went over to her body and kneeled down beside it, staining the knees of my jeans with blood. When i began to cry, I gently picked up her head, which was crushed with a very powerful force.I blubbered out "Mom...who would do such a thing to you?" I noticed bitemarks on her forehead. Now I was beginin to wonder what killed her. I then noticed bloody pawprints around the room. Could this mean she was mauled to death by some ravenous, rabid dog? It could be possible... I looked down her body to see if there was anymore damage to her body. I noticed she had 3 long gashes down her stomach, too big for any normal knife. This just got stranger by the second.
I gently put her head down, got up and ran into the hallway to use the phone to call someone, even though its kind of late to help my mother. I beginned to dail but there was a very deep growl from somewhere. This is where I started to get really scared. The killer might still be in the house!! I ran back into the kitchen and tried to find some means to defend myself. I looked at the counter and grabbed one of those big butchering knifes my mother uses to cut meat. I searched around for the source of the noise. I walked passed the basement door and the growl sounded louder. "Oh great..." I thought to myself, as the basement happened to be my worst nightmare when I was a kid and I still hate it. I slowly and shakily stepped onto the first step down and attempted to switch on the lights, but unfortunately for me they didn't work. "Yay me..." I thought to myself. I now had to walk around in the basement in the dark! I blindly walked down, feelin the walls to guide my way. Once i reached the bottom, I accidentely walked into the washing machine and hurt my hips. I was now officially in pain. Suddenly, I heard the growl again, and it sounded more aggresive than ever
I looked around in the inky darkness to find what was making the noise. I couldn't see a thing. All I could hear was the growl. I then saw two red eyes come out of nowhere. I gulped and readied myself, just in case. Suddenly, the whole room lit up and I was momentarily blinded! Once I regained my vision, I saw the most scariest thing i ever seen. There was a dog standing there, but its was completely enveloped in flames! I looked at its claws. They were huge!! I noticed they were bloodstained too. This is the killer! And I had a bad feeling i was about to become its next victim....
- by The Rogue Butler |
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- | Submitted on 06/07/2009 |
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- Title: Demonic Rising Chapter 2
- Artist: The Rogue Butler
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Demonic Rising Chapter 2 - The Revealance
ok again dont be a doucher by leavin crappy comments. I also notice that it may get kind of cheesy but I COULDNT COME UP WITH ANYTHIN ELSE SO CUT ME SOME SLACK! and yes i know i aint the best writer but please dont be douchey
plz rate and comment 5/5 - Date: 06/07/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- iMemoryless - 06/12/2009
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OhEmGee!!
Whyd you STOP?!@?!?@# - Report As Spam
- ToxxiicMuffiins - 06/07/2009
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That was an excellent follow up of the previous chapter.
Keep up the good work and i can't wait to read the next one. XD - Report As Spam