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I stared at the still figure lying In front of me. A small puddle of blood surrounded the body. I licked my lips hungrily. I was still hungry! A small noise at the door caused me to spin around. Standing in the doorway stood a tiny girl, her eyes were the of brightest red I’d ever seen. She held a small, ratty, blood streaked bunny in one hand, and a big tattered book in the other.
She held up the book to me. As I went to take it, she moved it away. Shaking her head she pointed at the cover with a tiny, bone white finger. It read in a flourishng gold script:
le Cronache di sangue
She smiled angelically at me and then turned around and started to walk away, swinging the blood streaked bunny gently. I tried to yell Stop or hey wait, what did that mean? Nothing seemed to come out of my lips. the whole world seemed to crumble from underneath me. I fell into the dark abyss with a loud scream.
My eye snapped open. The dreams were getting worse, as the nights passed by.My mouth burned like i had just swallowed a goblet full of blood. I wrinkled my delicate nose in disgust, why would I even think that? I rolled over onto my back and looked at the stars. They looked so forlorn, and lonely. As I watched the stars my mind wondered back to the dream. Who was the girl? What did the girl want, and what the hell does le Cronache di sangue mean?
- Title: Blood Chronicles
- Artist: gabbwee2
- Description: I came up with this just randomly. it is just th first couple of paragraphs. please comment on it, tell me if it is any good, or if it sucks. i would really like it if you would. Le Cronache di dangue means The blood chronicles in itialian, just to let you know.
- Date: 06/09/2009
- Tags: blood chronicles vampire
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Little Milkflower - 12/17/2009
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its so fantastic.......scratch that!
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- BiteSexual - 06/16/2009
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it AWSOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- vampire19710 - 06/14/2009
- cooleo if u write more can u plz message me??!!
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- _iPenutButtaCrunchi_ - 06/10/2009
- It's good, really... but it sounds a bit like mine, especially the title. confused
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- assassin number 392 - 06/09/2009
- Wow thats really good but it definately needs more to it.
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