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Ren was a young twelve year old girl who lived in the country-side in New England back in the 1600's.... She went to school and lived her life like every other twelve year old girl did back then. Ren was everyone's least favorite. She was always picked on and bullied but somehow she learned to cope. After a long day of school Ren was walking home enjoying the peace and quiet. She came to a stop in front of a huge garden and observed the growing plants naming every single plant by their smell. "Ah carrots that's new. Mrs. Typyt has never grown carrots." she said in amazement. " Why hello Ren. I see you have found my new carrots" she said smiling. Mrs. Typyt and Ren have always gotten along they were pretty much best friends. "Yes. Yes I did. They smell wonderful Mrs. Typyt. Have you been singing to them?" she said jokingly. "Hahaha! Youv'e always been such a kidder my darling." she replied with a smile. Ren observed the plants somemore then gave Mrs. Typyt a hug and said goodbye. Ren continued down the lane till she reached her home. She picked up the broom off the porch and swept the dirt off the front stoop. "Mother I'm home do I have any chores to do this evenning?" she asked. "Why of course not Ren. It's your birthday silly!" her mother said appearing out of the cluttered space they called the kitchen. " Oh mother you remebered! I bet father is going to bring home a cake today! I bet my lousy brother forgot though! " she said although she didn't really mind her brother forgetting her birthday. Ren rushed to the staircase and then someone knocked on the door. She rushed back down the stairs and opened the door.
It was her friend Mae. "Hello Mae!" she said quickly hoping her best friend hadn't forgoten her birthday. "Happy birthday Ren!" Mae shouted as she pulled out a small black box. "Oh mae you didn't have to get me anything!" she said as she opened the box. Ren gasped and stared at it in amazement. It was a real ring. It was actual gold, something you couldn't really find alot those days.
"I got it from a trader in the tavern when my mum took me with her to get some fresh meat." Mae said. "It's beautiful Mae! I love it! Thank you soo much this must have cost a fortune tell me all about it!" Ren said. " Ok I'll tell you on the way to Carla's house." Mae said. The two girls rushed through the door and ran all the way down the lane and stopped dead in their tracks. There were gaurds all over the place and two of them were holding a man. " That's the trader I got this ring from!" Mae shouted. All the gaurds turned their attention to the two girls. "Get that ring!" one of them yelled. The two girls looked at each other, screamed, then ran for their lives until they reached the creek. They hid in a tree hoping to escape the gaurds, but they never came. Ren and Mae climbed down the tree to inspect. There was no sign of the gaurds. The two girls were really confused. " What just happened? Why arn't the gaurds still chasing us?" Mae asked. "I don't know why the hell are you asking me? What in the Devil?" Ren looked around the corner to find a gaurd laying on his back breathless. They were very interested until they realized he was dead. The girls were now extremely worried and confused. They continued around the corner and they saw men in masks running around with bows and swords attacking the rest of the village. One of the men noticed the girls watching in horror. He sneaked off and snuk up behind them he took both of them hostage. They both screamed in horror. "Ello girls you'll be the entertainment tonight!" he said has he gave them a dirty smirk. He dragged them to a abbandoned home where their familys were. They were all chained to the wall dead. Ren and Mae's eyes swelled up and they both closed their eyes to avoid the sight of dead loved ones. Mae slowly untied the rope and tried to escape and all ren could do was sit there and do nothing. "Ren arn't you coming we can get ou...!" She didn't finish her sentence. Mae fell to the ground. Ren watched in horror as blood blood leaked from her body. Ren squealed. "That little sneaky b***h!" said one of the men. He walked over to ren. " I hope you'r enjoying this." he said. He picked Ren up and threw her to the wall. He took out a knife as the other men gathered around to watch. He got closer to Ren. She screamed in fear and dodged his quick thrust. "Ahh.. You little runt!" he screamed into her face. He got other men to tie her down. "I'm gonna mess you up so bad! You are gonna be in so much pain. Lets begin the fun!" he scremed to the other men. The other men chanted and he dug his knife under her eyes and began carving them out. She screamed in pain and wouldn't stop screaming. "AHHHHHH! AHHH! STOP IT! AHHHH!" she screamed. She was in so much pain she fell into a deep sleep. She awoke in a tent tied to a chair. She coudn't see. " AHHHHH! noooo! where are you! what did you do to me! Help!" she screamed. She sat in the chair screaming and screaming. She finally stopped screaming and just gave up all hope. "AHHHHH!" she screamed one last time. She began to cry but no tears came out. she just cried and cried....
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- | Submitted on 08/18/2009 |
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- Title: The End Of All Hope
- Artist: undercovermartyr
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Description:
A young girl that lives in a small time town in the country side of New England expeirences diffucult times as her family is slaughtered and she is kiddnaped and tortured to the fullest.... but young Ren as no idea what is to happen in her future...
This is only the first chapter.. i didn't have time to go on but i hope you enjoy it. - Date: 08/18/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Little Milkflower - 11/13/2009
- that's very.......gory.
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- emo-poppy - 08/20/2009
- wow thats good!
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- undercovermartyr - 08/18/2009
- i kinda had a dream that i was this girl and my eyes were cut out so i thought i would make it into a dream. I have her avi on my profile if you would like to see what she will look like in the endo the series. i have to create an avi of what she looks like in the beginning. so Ihope you enjoy it!
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