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Susan walked onto the scene. She flashed her badge. "Sherif!" I turn to see Jake waving me towards the front of the mansion. She felt her stomach twinge with fear. She strode to the steps, "Fill me in," she said quickly to her Ex-partner as he led her through the twists and turns of the mansion. "It's a case 47-89-J. Stabbed. No weapon." she nodded tightly as they ascended up the stairs. A few investigators were dusting the whole place. Jake stopped and Susan looked puzzled.
"Can't pass without your go Sheriff." He said
"Just go before i smack you upside the head."
Jake just chuckled and walked with her into the room. Susan wasn't ready for this. Her legs shivered beneath her, but she continued to stand. In that king sized bed was her sister. a gaping whole in her chest. "Oh mi God!" Susan shrieked. The same sister that had been her only friend when no one else was had been murdered? A hot tear rolled down her cheek. She couldn't believe it!
- by Crumpet the Tea |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 05/13/2010 |
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- Title: Twrirling Flashlight Chapter 1
- Artist: Crumpet the Tea
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From my Gaia Series, Twirling Flashlight. This is the First Chapter. Please comment and rate! Thanks!
Unfinished... Post a comment letting me know you want to know know what happens and I'll let you know when it's done. <3 - Date: 05/13/2010
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Crumpet the Tea - 05/13/2010
- No, I haven't time to finish it yet. I'll let you know when it's done if you'd like...
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- KatlynCassaundraIX - 05/13/2010
- That it?...o.o
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