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He walked through the city streets, new to the city lights. So naive, in this sude of town where red light shines on black nights, and people are always ready for fights. He ran in front of a girl sitting alone in an alley, she was shivering. He gave her his jacket, and she looked at him. . .Looking into his soul. She gave a smile and told him to follow her to a place. The naive boy went. . .Following her through the lit up city streets. They got there, and the girls face shown in the light. . .She was buetiful the naive boy thought. . .And the place was a hotel. "You helped me out. . . .I know what you men all want. . .So" she got a key, and the Naive boy only thought she was buying him a place to stay. . Even though he had a home. The girl told the boy to follow, saying it with a smile but it sounded hollow.
They went to a room, it had a view of the city and a large bed, and a bunch of other things. The boy went in first, and as he got in, the lights went off. . .And he heard the door lock. He turned around and saw the sillouhette of the girl, which danced like inscence smoke as she got closer, taking things off.
When she got to him, she ran her fingers down his cheek and lightly pushed him. The next thing that ran through the naive boys head was the city streets. . .Rushing traffic, unsurpassed ecstasy, the first touch of lust and temptation. . .his soul was on fire.
An hour or so later. . .He wished he could take it all back. The naive boy was no longer, and the buetiful temptress was now gone. The ecstasy did not feel like love, but now the boy can think of nothing else but getting that feeling again. He looked in the eyes of his innocents demise, and he can no longer go back. . .For he has givin his world to. . .That one girl. He left the hotel to feel the hot gaze of the city lights, and the cold smbrace of the city streets. Spreading like fire. . .Buring his soul. Nothing can cleanse his soul, and his mysterious temptress as vanished. . .So he will. . .Walk this world, wishing he could take it all back.
- by Bye-Bye-Crow |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/24/2010 |
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- Title: Innocene Lost.
- Artist: Bye-Bye-Crow
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Description:
I got the inspiration from a song, but the idea is my own.
- Date: 07/24/2010
- Tags: innocene lost
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