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Why did this have to be like this?
Could I be dreaming ?
I dont understand the violence,
the guns, and so much more.
I was in a crowed that was so sucure,
when someone fired it the gun off my whole body felt numb.
I watched in amazment as the victum slowly fadded away,
as blood was gushing out of his mouth,
he fell to the ground i knew it was over for him.
My heart was pounding as I ran not knowing who was next.
I made it back to the car safely.
To be re-united safly with my group was the best feeling in my life,
this is a day,of sorrow and a day to remember.
- by alfonsos-angel |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 05/19/2009 |
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- Title: a day 2 remember
- Artist: alfonsos-angel
- Description: i watched a guy get shot at my friends graduation and it hurt me really bad to see that
- Date: 05/19/2009
- Tags: violence
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Comments (1 Comments)
- CandyCaneRazorBlade - 07/13/2009
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It seems like a poem but it's hard to read as a poem because it's all clumped together.
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