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Waterfall To Life
As a mountain,
rainfalls upon,
as the sky pours,
life lives on,
as of plants,
as of humans,
as any life form around,
as the sun out of the clouds,
rainbow shows,
and the waterfall flows,
each drop of water,
represents like the life that starts,
many more as life goes,
dropping and flowing,
through hardship,
and towards each path,
making way towards life,
like a waterfall flows.
- Title: Waterfall To Life
- Artist: xholdenx
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Description:
Symbol of waterfall representing life as it goes toward hardship and the rough of having to compare to water flowing through rocks and stones ahead from the river.
Meaning is as clear as the poem made it basic for everyone to understand well maybe next time ill use college vocabulary if anyone wants one. Anyways give opinions and rate me thanks.
I love poetry. - Date: 05/05/2010
- Tags: waterfall life
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Comments (7 Comments)
- lovemeri - 07/15/2010
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I LUV it!!!!!!!!!!!! Fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You write GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'll give it a 5/5!!!!!! - Report As Spam
- Universal-Path - 05/11/2010
- I especially love the structure here. each line is short, but the poem itself is a tad lengthy, even giving it the appearance of a water fall. Other than that, I don't have much criticism except that you made it one run-on sentence with a bunch of commas. Thats generally frowned upon by poets.
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- for ezra - 05/07/2010
- a soothing poem, voting back great job and also with ur avi biggrin
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- death queen of dark magic - 05/07/2010
- its very good and well written :3 5/5 stars my friend
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- xemey - 05/06/2010
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Fabulous.
5/5 smile - Report As Spam
- Therru the panda - 05/06/2010
- 5/5, teehe ^U ^
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- Holly Hocked - 05/05/2010
- i like it enough to say something about it.....honestly it seems sorta....sterotypical <__< but other then that the wordplay is kinda plain but its good so i think a 3/5 is fair....maybe
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