The pace of rain

• Artist: Silent_Usagi_XxX
• Description: i wrote this one a rainy monday night. it was cold. i had been heart broken. this guy i had liked moved away. he always has been there for me. well he had. i never here from him. he always was like a brother. we didnt have a "we", he knew how i felt. he felt the same way. but he was leaving and didnt want a relationship. so on the day he left he kissed me on the cheek good bye. it was rainy on that day.
• Date: 12/06/2008
• Tags: pace rain

sitting all alone listening to
the rain hit my roof
my heart is split into two
i cant think
only focused on him
As i cry, the rain starts
to fall harder
i cry more- its
a down pour
time eventually goes on
im am calm
the rain starts to slow
i stop weeping- its the
end of the storm
as i cry the rain cries with me
forever and always it shall

Comments

[LovelyPoetress]

thats sad. sad
i dont like boys they're yucky. so yeah... razz
look at my poems.
5/5

[Kekkaishi Haigimora]

your right its sad, Grand Shadow Wolf
but there is a good ending,
and you have some mistake 4/5

[Silent_Usagi_XxX]

yeh that was last year. he was specal to me he gave me a copper heart to hold on two. i was never mad at him only sad he left. i will look at your poems

[Grand Shadow Wolf]

aww that sad im so sorry for you rate back on some of my poems please 5/5