- She, is the Earth. The apple of my eye, my purpose in life, a graceful being that is a blessing to the entire galaxy. She has me trapped in her beauty, i never want to leave her side, my world revolves around her, I am her moon. Sometimes, I wonder if she sees me floating there, during her hardest times and worst disasters. But whether she sees me or not, I would stand by her through anything, when she is wounded, i want to be there to hold her close. Though she is the reason for my happiness, she is also the reason for my disontent. For though I revolve around her, she does not revolve around me. Her eyes are on a different being, and He is to her as she is to me. He, is the sun, the source of the Earth's happiness and the source of my anger. He is a haughty and arrogant being, who is coveted by all planets because his light shines so bright. She sees him as the center of the universe, but things arent alwaysas beautiful as they seem. The sun is an abusive being, he represents significant danger to my precious earth. I must proect her, even if it means destroying the sun itself. One day my path will cross with his, and my Earth will see the true beauty of darkness.
- Title: Love revolution part one
- Artist: The Saiga
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Description:
A free verse a love among the stars, from the moon's point of veiw
with good feedback part two will be here soon - Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: love revolution earth moon space
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Comments (3 Comments)
- shawnielizabeth - 01/23/2009
- wow this poem is amazing XD i love it...that girl will knotice u someday cus evry girl wants a guy that feels that way towards them 5/5
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- shoogah-baybee - 12/15/2008
- 4 some reason im kind of in this situation! im the girl & u r my fren! idk if my fren feels this way, but i think he does! its wierd how i got 2 this poem wen im in this situation. 5/5 very well done....
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- Miss Liza - 07/15/2008
- I like it. A little more flow would have helped it a long, but it's far better than your competition
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