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She looks out to the sea
Crying
Fading amongst herself
Watching the waves
The cold water washes over her feet
Her tears join the ocean
They wash away
As she plunges into the icy rage
No fight,
Just sleep.
- Title: Tears
- Artist: Leavina
- Description: I was inspired by a news story of a girl in my neighborhood who committed suicide. : (
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: tears
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Comments (3 Comments)
- xxxsexykrisxxx - 02/07/2009
- its great
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- ParkMusic - 07/17/2008
- the poem is nice but its sad that inspiration comes from people who kill themselves. But its nice and visual.
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- RaynyCloud - 07/17/2008
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:O I really like it. Short, but I think any extra length would have ruined it.
It kind of reminds me of when bella jumps off a cliff in the book New Moon. - Report As Spam
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