Inside, Inside

• Artist: ribbonforluv
• Description: i wrote this when i was down. I had no more reason to keep going... but then i picked up a pencil and rhymed my feelings...
• Date: 07/17/2008
• Tags: inside rhyme

Inside, Inside
The little girl dies
Her heart battered
All lovely memories shattered
No light in her eyes
Her broken soul cries

Inside, Inside
The little girl dies
Wallowing in self-demise
No love in her heart
So different from the start

Inside, Inside
The little girl dies
No more painful muted cries
Now peacefully she lies

Inside, Inside
The little girl died
Her broken body on the outside
She lays in a pool of red
Her limp body across the crimson bed..

Shush....theres no reason to cry for the dead......

Comments

[Uber Bee-otch]

That's amazing it really described how a felt when I was going through a lot

[challen08]

very nice haha love the way the girl dies from the inside, like shes being devoured by sin hahah love it!

[jocef_XP]

what a plot twist!

[funnyman332]

Perfect way of describing someone dead. Inside, the little girl is dead, and so is the outside. Love it. 5/5

[helena_babe]

wow amazing 0.0 i love it 10/10 is almost like you were describing me