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The world may end
the stars may fall
but we can make it thru it all
thru rain and lightening
thunder and shame
over the bridge with falling rain
we'll make it thru with no one to blame
our love till the end will never faint
Written by: Paige heart
[KoolBeansBabee]
- by KoolBeansBabee |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/19/2008 |
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- Title: Tell me what ya think!
- Artist: KoolBeansBabee
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- Date: 07/19/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- citygurl__63-wisteria- - 07/25/2008
- i agree with CelticAngelic- it is a very good poem so keep up the good work
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- CelticAngelic - 07/25/2008
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Hey lovers, No ones perfect, I like it, others will like it. Some of us need inspiration. Not all of the poetry I write rhymes and a lot of it isn't enforced, but it has meaning.
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- Lovers Never Tell - 07/19/2008
- Where did you copy this from because I know I read that exact first three lines in an icon before. And also, there's nothing here to really go on. There's no grammar, no form, poor and forced rhymes, no poetic mechanics other than the rhymes and it's nothing but a cliche, one I heard before also. It's a good START, but that's all you got. I'm giving you a 1. If I could I'd give you a zero because I know that first two-three lines are copied.
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- Zajas - 07/19/2008
- Nice, I like the simplicity of it, yet it says so much. 5 stars smile
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