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I stared into old, tired eyes engaged in
war-ravaged dunes topped with ebony moons
so sedentary, one could travel on for days
while still find footprints leading home.
[But would you let me turn back?]
Winds play at tossing in hints of desire;
here and there specks of a forgetful sunrise-
its rays now eclipsed in darker emotions.
Sun poison temperatures were replaced
quickly when mouths wrote this destiny,
forcing fists up. [Do you hold the key?]
Three words should've dissipated
forthcoming sand storms, but my mouth
puked "I don't know" on the parchment.
Such a carefully trekked understatement
was unintentional [at least consciously].
I wonder what he holds in that fist,
for I cannot find it in the Sahara of his eyes.
Once thrilled and terrified with anticipation;
I now only glimpse at the bruised fingers
hiding everything I so desperately need,
a tugging lingers as his caravan awaits.
So, I stand, staring into aged eyes, cautious of
the Fate-drunk pens finishing this tale.
For a more updated look on world travels,
follow me to book two on isle nine.
- by Lovers Never Tell |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/19/2008 |
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- Title: Lost in Your Desert
- Artist: Lovers Never Tell
- Description: If the poem was written correctly, I don't believe it'll need a description.
- Date: 07/19/2008
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Lovers Never Tell - 07/21/2008
- Actually it flows very well. It doesn't need a rhyme scheme to have rhythm.
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- KoolBeansBabee - 07/21/2008
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Wow.. you were critic about my poem? Have you seen yours? ha
It's deep, but it doesn't flow.. poems are suppose 2 flow.
I sounds like your just talking in detail..
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