The Line

• Artist: Radrow
• Description: A poem about friendship and the struggles we have to go through for eachother.
• Date: 07/22/2008
• Tags: friendship poetry friend buddy

The line drew across the sky,
And it drew across the stars,
It drew across the ocean's life,
It drew so very far,

It crossed the borders of nations,
It came across the sea,
It came across your heart,
Then it came to me,

I grabbed the line and held it,
It wiggled all about,
It tried to cross my happy mind,
And cut that happiness out,

I wrestled with that line,
The dawn and until the end,
Until the worlds stops turning,
The line wont be my friend,

The line you see is a tragic thing,
It draws between those who mind,
It brings a line between spirits,
It brings anger to those who are kind,

And if you ever see that line,
Coming after you,
Give me a call and in a minute,
I'll wrestle your line too.

Comments

[ElStupido]

lovely indeed. i loved the idea of the line and friends standing up for one another :3

[mofosplz]

Aw, cute! Pretty well-written. I thought the last line of the first stanza was a bit lazy--c'mon, you can do better than that. ;3

[sashimi_sushi1234]

nice

[cyopathic1]

i so liked this write on