How could you?

• Artist: sorealsweetiepie333
• Description: Love
• Date: 07/24/2008
• Tags: love

I wanted to leave you i felt so bad sad

Until the day you turned your back

I took so long to spit it out neutral

U turned around and shouted it out

" I know what your thinking just end it now so i can go ask your best friend out!"

In a shock i looked around and every1 began to laugh rofl

How could you hurt me when i felt so bad

Boys sure can leave pain in your heart! heart

Comments

[i run with wolves 303]

yeah.... they can. but push through it babe. anyways. great job. well written and very thought provoking. if there is anything i could throw in for constructive critisism it would be to add a little more detail. But i know that isnt always possible so don't think to much into it. way to let out your story and keep writing. you have a knack for it.

[urmutter]

lol I feel bad for that person's friend lawl. Yeah and just so you know girls can be bitches too. I honestly don't know why my ex agreed to go out w me when she wouldn't ever meet me anywhere and she told me it was my fault we never saw each other.

[last chance for survival]

AH! s**t! im on a friends account! oh well, im actually a girl! -_-;;

[last chance for survival]

hmm... i don't get what kind of poem this is, and the writing isn't very proffesional. plus, i would be heartbroken if my boyfriend was asked out by my best friend... except- i dont have a best friend. -_-;;

my bf and i have been going out for 2yrs, but we've known each other for three. cha!

[selene_queen_of_a_lost]

same here she asked him out right in front of me after he broke up with me and i cried for a day but then i asked out my friend and we've been dating for 5 months!!!

[sweetness333]

Aww that is so sweet!! That happened to me and i really felt bad so i no how u feel i cried for 2 days