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Rain sheeted down without mercy
It would never cease
I held out my hand and waited
Waited for you to escape with me
To a place where no one knows
To a place where we can finally be free
The water began to rise
Shifting around my ankles
We ran as far as we could
But the rain had consumed our hidden place
And so we ventured on, searching
For a place where we can finally be free
The numb chilling embrace
As the downpour waded up to my waist
We hid under the willow tree
As rained cried from its emerald leaves
And so we waited for a place
For a place where we can finally be free
The rain never halted that day
It rose higher, stealing our breath
I held you above my head
So at least you could live
And so I struggled for you
For a place where you could be free
- by TearsofBlood |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/24/2008 |
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- Title: Treading Through Water
- Artist: TearsofBlood
- Description: I had this thought on a rainy day and I was thinking about the will to sacrifice your own life for the one you love and the two ideas merged.
- Date: 07/24/2008
- Tags: water sacrifice love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- TearsofBlood - 12/15/2008
- It most certainly is mine, I would never steal a poem
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- Charlie Loves Apples - 12/14/2008
- >.> I hope this is yours. I'm gonna give it a 5/5.
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- selene_queen_of_a_lost - 07/24/2008
- wow i have some one right now that i would do the same for but wow i feel ur poem
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