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the glow in your eys
as the shadows glaze on your face
just a look,
a simple stare
makes my beating heart race
the tone,
of your pure voice,
your laughter,
your smile ...
when you turn to say goodbye,
it leaves me alone,
in denial.
missing all that you contained,
and the memories that passed.
my days with you
seemed to rush by so fast.
leaving an empty spot,
where i use to see ...
a boy so full of life.
a dream only to be ...
shadows turn,
as you soon move on,
our small friendship ...
will soon be gone ...
i'll try to look forward for the things ahead,
but i'll find myself thinking
of you instead ...
-Meli E.
- by SukiDesu_4evr |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/12/2008 |
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- Title: Missing
- Artist: SukiDesu_4evr
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Description:
a poem i wrote when my crush moved away ...
all the way to new zealand!!!
BYE JOHN! - Date: 08/12/2008
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- kurai_okami12 - 12/12/2008
- I like the poem itself but I believe it is to rough. Try refining it a bit, fix grammatical mistakes and spelling mistakes. Also I would get rid of any unnecessary periods.
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