Crossroads

• Artist: Beautiful Simplicity
• Description: Written as a reflection during a retreat.
• Date: 09/22/2008
• Tags: crossroads

We might not have realized
It in the beginning
But it’s starting to grow

What will happen?
No one knows
But I’m not afraid to fall

So hold on tight
And here we go

Here we go again
Back to the beginning
Or is it that end?

What will happen I don’t care
They say in love
And war all is fair

But is it right to step on others
Like we step on stones?

Standing at a crossroads
Someone tell me where
‘Cause I don’t know which
Way to go

Now look how far we’ve gone
Left everything in the past
And tried to move on

So smile darling ‘cause
There’s nothing you can’t overcome
Just close your eyes
And find the confidence to go on

Comments

[iMangoLemonade]

Ooh lovely! Please look at mine!

[Sweet Antheia]

Full of feeling. I love it. You write beautifully.

[Fallon Rei]

Good work, I like it. I love that you don't just state things like you're in conversation. Playing with word usage and sentence structure is the art of poetry. A true poet is an artist, a philosopher, an inventor, and, most importantly, a mirror reflecting the world. Thank you for being true to the heart and soul of a genuine poet. ^^ And it's nice to read a piece that isn't all tangled thoughts, mispelled words and improper grammar. 5/5

[Toppyknot]

Meh, sort of reads like a bunch of cliches all jammed together. Like, I could grab a handful of Hallmark cards and read off the texts inside in no particular order, and it would come out something like that.

[UNKNOW dude ii]

i like it stars XD congrats lol
comment 1 of mine? (u don't have 2 but it wood be nice lol)