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Wound
We built the Devil's teeth-
of a valley, made a maw,
coaxed out His cancered, blackened tongue
and begged for him to have a taste as we skulked among the buds
further blackening his mouth.
wicked spires, minarets
unraveling saffron, Sucking dye,
water for its wheezes-
a never-ending thirst.
We tied our Children to His teeth,
allowed them breadth enough
to twist about,
thread wire Twine to cut the plaque,
tear it out of corners, shadows,
cast it to the streets:
Further blind an age of Men!
Further make our sooty selves
blend in.
We listened to the Devil's teeth,
dreamed of golden things
as his lungs, Draconian, (a mile deep)
breathed gold as we did Air.
And soon the world was gray,
Her spectral, precious blood
spilt, welled under crust,
waiting:
Will a worthy Man be born again?
Comments (4 Comments)
- Toppyknot - 09/23/2008
- Really? Deep and disturbing? I wouldn't quite call it that... but people see things differently, so... n__n
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- mcsteezy - 09/23/2008
- o my god...its deep and disturbing...yet so perfectly worded...
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- Toppyknot - 09/22/2008
- Evocative. Sounds like provocative. Which reminds me of other things that make me giggle.
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- delleve - 09/22/2008
- This is really good. Your language is really evocative.
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