Silence

• Artist: Stefano Wolfwood
• Description: Read and see.
• Date: 10/07/2008
• Tags: silence

Silence,silence a viscous thing.
Like oil it flows down the walls.
Silence, silence a deafining thing.
It echoes down the empty halls.
Silence, silence a palpable thing.
Like silk to a blind mans touch.
Silence, silence a confusing thing.
Like something you love, but hate so much.

Comments

[Ryuhime Kurosu-sama]

This poem was expressive, but it misses the key passion that makes true poetry great.

[Mel Wel]

I really enjoyed reading this, aside from the spelling errors. o.o I was confused with the word "defining" because I wasn't sure for a moment if you meant defining (as in explaining) or deafening..until I got to the next line, of course! ^_^ Thank you for sharing.