Not A Word

• Artist: Hidden Shadow Love
• Description: I wrote this poem a couple months back in a moment of despair and anger. It may not seem like it, but it's contributed to my crush. Feedback and opinions are dearly welcomed.
  (P.S. The last two lines were recently added. Should I keep them?)
• Date: 10/18/2008
• Tags: love hate anger

Don't kiss me,
Don't say a word,
Just stay by my side,
Show your love you claim to have,
Be with me through the hard times,
Stay at my side when I yell hurtful words,
Come after me when I try to hide,
Show not your love through kisses or words,
Be there, stay here, hear me out when I say,
"I hate you"
Because I do,
But if you love me,
You'll go ahead and hear me through,
Though I wonder if it's true,
That I'm also in love with you.

Comments

[Matt Prowler]

Honestly I Think This Is My Favorite That You Have Written

[Tsunami From Hell]

i love it! the last 2 were the spark, you are a great writer smile

[OchitaFuyu]

well in not one to judge but this poem did have elements of power and did make the point triumph and it was good over all

[Teayo]

very cute short and powerful.. it gets the point across nicely it could be a little longer though but your feelings are shown .. yet slightly hidden .. from this i take it that you are the type of person to not let someone fully know you.

[ahouseofwolves]

A beautiful poem, I think. I understand about the crush thing - I kinda knew it was about them before I even read the description! I'd give it a five out of five.