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When the days passed,
We became closer to each other
Even words and actions
Your are tightly held in my heart
Sometimes have pesky times
So we have laughter around
But don't you know my world suddenly change
From the day you came to my life?
I always remember you
Sometimes I miss you very much
Because you are the only one
That makes me happy and laugh
Sometimes I want to hug you
Simply because I love you
I love you very much
But I'm wondering is this..
DESTINY??
- Title: Destiny
- Artist: LilyGrape
- Description: My destiny..
- Date: 10/22/2008
- Tags: color world
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Comments (6 Comments)
- InkheartKitty16 - 12/24/2008
- its good, i luv it, tons better than mine. u even wrote in the true poem form so once again awesome job 5/5
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- LilyGrape - 10/23/2008
- Thank you for all qho votes to my entry.. ^^
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- icp_freak_XD - 10/22/2008
- i like it. i can feel what you feel. you should write more.
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- EmerySalander - 10/22/2008
- your feelings came across very well, you might want to use the word love just once in the last stanza and find another word to substitute in for the other time, but overall very good!
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- Angel Husky - 10/22/2008
- Hmmmmmmmmmm!
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- heda - 10/22/2008
- hm, I don't know what to think about it. 3*
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