Deadly Sins

• Artist: xXPaint It In BlackXx
• Description: why not you tell me.
  
• Date: 11/06/2008
• Tags: deadly sins

I hate this world,
I hate this life
I'll end it all,
with the cut from a knife

The burning.....
It hurts
The more that I bleed
The aching won't stop,
It's more than i need

Ready to fall,
Ready to hang
Or maybe I'll shoot,
And make a big bang

Ashes to ashes,
Crib to grave
My life is no longer
There's nothing to save....

Comments

[Gone4ever23]

same thoughts tha run through my life daily...

[A god Among Us]

I love it. It speaks for those who dont

[deathwish432]

this really comforts me i mean i ahte the feeling when its like the only feeling you fell is deppresion and i hate that . i mean im always sad or when im happy it fades away slowly.

[cutezjmce]

it's kinda spooky...but its a great poem!!!

[- L u c i p h y r -]

I know the feeling. I've tried to find comfort in my friends, but they don't care....so I draw. It makes me feel better. I love the poem though. it's amazing.

[-Tainted Mail-]

Wow, that's a pretty dark poem. I like it, though.

[Archaetura]

I love this. You've got a talent for catching that feeling.
I know what you mean, where nothing is worth saving, but you've just got to believe maybe you can make a difference in the world make someones life better, that's what saved me.