Disorder

• Artist: Kanji-wolf-Tatsumi
• Description:
• Date: 11/15/2008
• Tags: disorder

Disorder,

This is chaos,
This is hell,
The world has ended,
The life is gone,
No soul will live,
No soul will strive,
Down into the River of Disorder,
Trying to escape,
This was not how its supposed to be,
The world will never see,
Life,
Love,
Liberty,
All because Disorder
Has corrupted me.

Comments

[dizzyree13]

nice ! no really nice

[Fleshy Flower]

I find it somewhat hackneyed, nothing I havent read a million times before.

I do like however how the poem itself seems to be in disorder, that was pretty nifty. smile