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Intro
Throughout my life I've behaved good,
but being good is not always good.
The wicked has better luck than me.
They have a better life than me.
Part 1
You think you can do anything,
touch everything,
and take anything and everything.
If God won't punish you,
then I will
and what better way to punish you-
by taking away what you use for evil.
I will be your punisher,
but we are not yet there for the finisher,
I will make you pay,
and you will pray-
for mercy,
but tough luck-I'm all out of mercy-
for you.
Part 2
After 30 days and 30 nights,
we are coming to an end,
and soon I will take your rights-
to live to the very end.
I will be death for you today,
today you will pay,
you will pray,
you will cry,
and you will fall in despair as you try-
to escape your fate,
but my hate-
for you
will not let you.
So before you die,
I will make you lie-
on a table-and rip what hurts you the most,
but this is just the beginning for the worst,
you will pay,
you will pray,
but down there-they will have no mercy for you.
So enough said-I bid you,
Farewell.
- by Broken_Guardian-Auron- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/20/2008 |
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- Title: Pray
- Artist: Broken_Guardian-Auron-
- Description: This poem is for those guys that harm and abuse innocent helpless girls.
- Date: 11/20/2008
- Tags: pray mercy punishment death blood
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Broken_Guardian-Auron- - 12/31/2008
- thanks for the comment and I really do appreciate the constructive criticism, I'm just a beginner and need all the help I can get biggrin
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- Nurse Garland - 12/31/2008
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i like it. but you could use some work..
your rhyme scheme is a bit off...
sorry if i commin off as a betch but constructive criticism leads to greatness - Report As Spam
- Broken_Guardian-Auron- - 12/18/2008
- thanks for the comments, keep 'em coming! lol biggrin
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- Aukaru - 12/10/2008
- OMG, finally a guy that is not like those other idiots, wow I LOVE THIS POEM!!! 9999999999999999/5 XD
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- gabbel - 12/10/2008
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wow i liked it!
very nice!
yeah thanks for noticing things other guys dont!
they have no respect for us!
love the poem - Report As Spam
- Broken_Guardian-Auron- - 12/05/2008
- hey there people, I made a minor change to my poem, I just renamed my first stanza to "intro", hope you people like it biggrin
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- x__C r e a m - C h i - 12/05/2008
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I like your poem very much...
Thanks for reading mine btw...
Also, did u happen to look at my other poem Solitary Lovers?
You should read it - Report As Spam