Broken Wings

• Artist: Kaira Angel
• Description: Basically, this is a poem about life. This time, its about drugs. You can'y make a living if you take drugs, just like you can't fly on broken wings.
  
  Plz comment and rate fairly!!!
• Date: 12/03/2008
• Tags: broken wings

A knife in my hand
with a hole in my heart
my life is a strand
about to part

You can't fly
On broken wings
so just don't try
On the ground you cling

Eat the dust
Break our friendship
Broke our trust
now life as a rip...

Farther and farther
into the abyss you fall
life just gets harder
no meaning at all

A feather
floating off with the breeze
our life is severed
and starts to leave

You can't fly
On broken wings
but you still try
sadness it brings

Comments

[Kaira Angel]

the drug part is the broken part, and life is the wing. you ruin your life my takink drugs, just like you cant fly on broken wings......does that help...? sweatdrop

[x__C r e a m - C h i]

I like it, but i dont see where the drug part comes to mind...sorry..
5/5 still sounded very good though, read my poems k?