Inspiration

• Artist: Hime Suki Gemini
• Description: It was written for school, but I really liked it and decided to show the peoples of Gaia! XD
  'Inspiration' was inspired by Langston Hughes' "Theme for English B"
  And like the title suggests, it's about well... Inspiration.
• Date: 12/12/2008
• Tags: inspiration

Me, Hime Suki Gemini, 16 years old
Responds to inspiration with a heart of gold
When writer’s block occurs it turns cold.
I love to write, and read, and play,
In New York, inspiration comes every day,
The young, the old, the black, the white,
People are people differences despite.
School is my education,
Whilst fanfiction is my salvation,
It gives a great sensation,
I don’t believe that we are ‘God’s’ creation,
In fact God in general gives me frustration,
People are just looking for an explanation.
Call me an atheist,
But I do meditation,
Call me a Buddhist,
But I don’t always have relaxation,
Call me stressed,
You may be right,
But I wouldn’t change my life.
It gives me inspiration.

Inspired by Langston Hughes', “Theme for English B”

Comments

[Hime Suki Gemini]

thanks! yea ip might be a good idea x3
your comments are much appreciated!

[Enimi]

The rhyming is great, but maybe you might want to consider iambic pentameter on some of the lines.

[Enimi]

I think it's great! It shows your feelings and reflections on the world.

[Enimi]

I think it's great! It shows your feelings and reflections on the world. It also shows how conflicting facts might differ on peoples' views on religion. The rhyming is great, but maybe you might want to consider iambic pentameter on some of the lines.

[Hime Suki Gemini]

Is this any good?