Empty Meaning

• Artist: Ladynightstalker101
• Description: I see that all of the sad poems here are about breakups (most). I tried going for an approach of a girl who seems to have everything, but actually has a terrible secret eating away at her, more terrible than we can imagine. I tried to portray how society praises the strong, even if they are fake, and shuns the weak, even if they have good reason to be weak.
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: empty meaning

She laughs.
We Laugh.
She smiles.
We can’t help but smile.

We are muddled together.
Not sure,
Of our feelings.
We envy, and praise.

A leader amidst the dark.
Our triumphant light.
Saviour.
Perfect.

She is unreachable.
The Mighty One.
Our problems drown us.
We are pitiful.

Liar
She is.
She is
Empty.

She is
a dead light.
Hollow
within.

Our problems are nothing.
She drowns in her tears.
We do not envy,
We do not praise.

We walk by.

Comments

[XxZombie_AlicexX]

Love it! It's amazing, when I was reading was like this person must have written from the heart or something. It's moving and I know how the girl in the poem feel. Great job. *applauses* 5/5

[bonnie505]

i love it,it was deep and i totally see alot of breakup poems and in music LOL!! 5/5 good luck keep writng