deep

• Artist: Keskymiko
• Description:
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: deep

Silence rings through the night,
hark all is rejoiceing,
a new light is shed twords or new days,
hopeing to be filled with our last few feelings,
we take all to lightly the life we are given,
like those that are tooken by gifts that we are given,
we see the things in life we are most afraid of,
yet we are still of this world,
a selfish human,
but light is here,
leading you through the darkness to lead us,
some will see it,
some will never see it,
if u see it you will see life for what was intended of you,
eventhough I am the same as you,
we,
us,
we are all the same,
yes,
all the same,
just... unknowing,

(i have more please read them ^-^)

Comments

[Keskymiko]

Okay, i admit to bad spelling XD but I usualy just jot things down when ideas come to me.
(short understanding)
I was implying that some ppl are matrialistic* and that those that see the true meaning of what it really means to be here people are so thick-headed and I"m not puting everyone elce underneath me I'm jsut saying that it's how I see things.

[Marinan]

Same comment here, just a little explanation and maybe a description of what you're getting at.

[Vincent_Iscariot_Key]

Not too be too harsh, but needs a little spell check, and "u" doesn't look good in a poem, you did it twice, then it seemed you corrected it in later within the line; but overall, I am still trying to grasp on what you are saying, so, can you please tell me?