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12/17/08 By: Brandon K. McLemore
“I Feel…”
I am a distant soul lost in dispare seeking her touch again, again in pain but want her love still.
I wonder is she will feel the pain that lover’s heart sought out, sought out no pain…just a tender heart for my care.
I hear the heartbeet of every lover stunned, cracking blood flowing teary vain cut blood fountained heart.
I want to expereance the tenderness feeling of wipping the tears from her cheek.
I am a distant soul lost in dispare seeking her touch again, again in pain but want her love still.
I pretend that I don’t care about your choice, your soul was to gentle for such hurtful actions.
I feel the firery ashes of painful memories blow in the sacred wind, the blood drops so crimson red from being the darkness.
I touch the dreams of her inner disiers softly felt, making it easyer for her to handle.
I worry that I will giot through life being remembered by no great acomplishments, that I will never feel love back when given love.
I cry for the nothingness in my own darkness, yet I cry for everything that is nothingness.
I am a distant soul lost in dispare seeking her touch again, again in pain but want her love still.
I understand you are young, that life has been kind to you, and have not expereanced lover’s pain.
I say that life is too short, that hell is one step away, but I don’t know true hell or lifes hardships.
I dream that the light will prevale, that the darkness dies with these sadened emotions and buried forever.
I try to care for her like I should, I should be this way or that way.
I hope for everlasting breath, for this pain to end and to never surface again.
I am a distant soul lost in dispare seeking her touch again, again in pain but want her love still.
- by Edge Bjorn |
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- | Submitted on 12/17/2008 |
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- Title: I Feel...
- Artist: Edge Bjorn
- Description: I wrote this cause I realy wanted to desribed some things about myself..so tell me if u guys like it ause i do read my comments and write back....
- Date: 12/17/2008
- Tags: feel
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Emmizine - 01/28/2009
- wow...
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- winterskiergirl - 12/18/2008
- Like I told you many times before.....you are a good artist..whether your drawing or writing....like the others its beautiful... and keep writing...i want to read them all...oo i still want to finish your story. i hate it when people do that...they leave me hanging and it drives me crazy...lol.
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- soundsanctuary - 12/17/2008
- :O i like it :3 i really do- you show so much emotion. this is something i can easily relate to- you write it so well, giving away what you mean, but in an abstract way. usually i dont have to think about what most poems mean, but this.. very well written :3
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- clearwater13 - 12/17/2008
- this is cool
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- Edge Bjorn - 12/17/2008
- oh really...thanks...I apreaciate your opion and understanding.... smile
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- Unfound Dreams - 12/17/2008
- i like it. I think that it is good, and opens a new pathway of thinking to the wrold. I think that your way of thinking is different then most individuals, but at the same time we are alike. I like and I give you an A, and not just for effort. biggrin
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