Creature from the Blue

• Artist: Angelically_Enlightened
• Description: i really liike this poem about one of my favorite animals. Tell me what u think of it please
• Date: 12/17/2008
• Tags: creature from blue

As I swim gracefully in the water
Theres not a feeling I love more
Than swimming with the Dolphins
As past me they soar

Like torpedos
But less threatening
With such playful creatures
Around them I could never sense such a thing

Theyre like the children of the water
As innocent as can be
Playing around and doing the tricks that they do
Theyve Always seemed to amaze me!

Theyre so mysterious and yet so graceful
It brings something out of me
I cannot explain
Something a human couldnt bring

And thats why this place I love
With the water and Dolphins
I call it my paradise above
And as I leave they whine, but they know ill be back again

Comments

[BorisAndrei]

its lovely not to sound rude but you still have long ways to go i see a star ahead and theres room for improvement i know you'll pull through

[RobbyTheReaper]

i like it smile its really good 5/5

[dancing_under_stars]

I liked it alot. Your imagry is very detailed