Lime Street

• Artist: Braesin Ousama Tosen
• Description: Me and a friend of mine were doing IM poetry, when you basically have to write a poem on the spot in IM. This was mine. Tells the story of a girl that played with the feelings of her boyfriend with dire consequences...
• Date: 12/23/2008
• Tags: corner lime street saiyko death

She stood alone on the corner of Lime

She had told him to be there...to be on time

they had agreed on the phone last night

but then they broke into an outrageous fight

upset, she was at his ignorance

for he didn't respect: for instance

the weekend before he had come onto her

using the cabin vacation as a lure

she wasn't ready and turned him down

he tried to play it off like the joke of a clown

she didn't buy it she knew what he wanted

so she decided, for fun, that she would flaunt it

it drove him mad and off the wall

so he hung up last night, and that was all

so now she was on the street corner: its nine

then she saw a shadow of a line

on the street corner in front of her, so it must be above

she looked up in horror for there was her love

strung up on a rope: so he had been on time

that poor girl, alone on the street corner of lime.

Comments

[DivineXLover]

Yo awesome man the context and the rhythm of this poem was perfect, you have to be careful to not play with your lovers emotion...we all have needs and yea sometimes they cant be met but you should tell them ur not ready and not play with there emotions because they might take it anothe way...

[Maki Casanova]

One of the worst things you can do to a person razz lay with their feelings. This is really good. 5 stars. biggrin

[TekNam]

Ouch...

[shivdawg]

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