Doomed

• Artist: Screw_A_Kitten
• Description: I really don't know why I wrote this. I'm starting to write sad poems lately. My mom says that there's something I'm hiding but whatever. You can hate it or like it. I personaly dont care.
• Date: 12/23/2008
• Tags: doomed

The 1st time you said "Hi"..
My heart raced.
The 1st time you asked me out..
I lost my place.
The 1st time you kissed me..
I couldn't breathe.
The 1st time you said "I love you"..
My head was filled with ease.
But the 1st time you broke up with me..
I died.
When you wanted to get back together..
I thought you lied.
When I refused you..
You cried.
But every night I think about you.
I just couldn't bear another wound.
I still keep one of your old shoes.
And I realized, I was doomed.

Comments

[Xice-cold-hartX]

i liked it its very well.... it kindof has a rythem! ^^

[-to write -- on her arms-]

I really like it too
=]

[Emo_Cupcake1516]

Man... Nice poem maybe your mind is trying to tell you something maybe you should listen to it and write more poems.

[Lord XkornX]

i like it