dance of terror

• Artist: XxHailey-BugxX
• Description: oooooooo! sceary!lolz
  its 1 of mi favorites!plz comment and rate! thank u!
  its about how sceary it is being alone in a dark and creepy place!plz let me no if it needs work bi sending me PM's or comments on mi pro and here! thank u!dont 4get!...plz tell me wat i can do to make mi poems better!thx luv u guyz!:)
• Date: 12/26/2008
• Tags: dance terror

window pains come crashing down
amidst the tears and the pain
vanishing hopes are gone and flew away
up above through twilight
shadows cast across the floor
reflections of the past
trembeling thoughts of one
dwelling deep within the soul
a mystical sense or reality
captured by the craze
all in bewilderment
of the shock in the wave
chreatures of the dimness
chattering amoungst the green
everything slows in stillness
what is this we see?

Comments

[Xx1LIAM1xX]

omg! hailey its awesome! and knowing that ur english isnt vry good! the wording was really good! 5 stars! smile super duper job! LOL! smile