Now You See Me

• Artist: Angielaa
• Description: Once again, it's about a girl whose boyfriend's never there when she really needs him. Tell me what you think.
• Date: 12/31/2008
• Tags: love goodbye breakup

I close my eyes
And count to ten
When I open them up
You're gone again.

You're never here
When I really need
A ear to listen
A shoulder to lean.

When you leave
A piece of me is broken
Words left unsaid
Words left unspoken.

The only time
You were ever by my side
Was when people were after you
And you needed to hide.

So this is goodbye
You're all alone
Now you see me
And now you don't.

Comments

[Rizu77]

that was awesome and smooth and it had rhythm. 5/5

[ShiroWhite]

I like the rhythm in this. It has a slight hiccup near the end but overall it sounds smooth, and the point is clearly defined. 5/5