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I tried to be like like everyone else,
I tried to be like you.
I tried so hard to change myself,
I tried like I always do.
I tried to soothe my aching pains,
but you just made them worse.
I tried to scream out to you, my love,
But my voice would not be heard.
I tried to show how much I care,
I tried to make you see,
I tried so hard for just one glance,
To get you to look at me.
I tried to spin, instead I fell,
I finally had my chance.
I tried to get up (didnt go so great) ,
When you reached out your hands.
I tried to speak, to tell you thanks,
But my lips would just not move.
I tried again, my one last shot,
My voice did not improve.
I tried once more, as he turned 'round,
And this time I did not struggle.
I tried to whisper but instead,
The words came out in a tumble.
I tried to say "thanks for helping me"
But thats not what came out.
Instead I said, "Please, don't go,
I love you without a doubt."
We've been together, you and I,
We're off to start our love anew.
And when we're apart, I want to cry,
because you said "I love you too."
- by Frosted Cookii3 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/11/2009 |
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- Title: I tried.
- Artist: Frosted Cookii3
- Description: Its just another on-the-spot poem, i dunno If you'll like it... comment plz...
- Date: 02/11/2009
- Tags: tried love happy ending
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Frosted Cookii3 - 08/19/2010
- Thanks~ You're all cool. :3
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- emeraldpuppy9 - 02/14/2009
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amazing ^_^
i <3 it!
X3 5 million/5 X] - Report As Spam
- Saku_Uchiha1 - 02/12/2009
- surprised i like it. >_> darn she commented before me.....
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- Gaara_Silent_lover - 02/11/2009
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Amazing.
I couldn't of done it better myself.
^^
5! x3 - Report As Spam