Alone in the Dark Before Death

• Artist: DragonArcher93
• Description: Death, Fear, Darkness, Hate, ect.
• Date: 02/28/2009
• Tags: alone dark before death

Alone and full of confusion
Everything seems to came and go like an illusion
Death coming real soon
The only light is from the moon
Full of fear
Dropping to the ground is a tear
Not wanting to cower
Having no power
Knowing nothing and everything
Fearing the littlest thing
Darkness surrounds the night
Very little light
Having no fate
The night sky is full of hate
Pain going through your heart
It tears you apart
Nothing to save you
You know this is very true
The end is near

Comments

[Tigi]

I love the way this poem rhythms, and tells a story at the same time! I like the first two lines, and the line about 'Pain' and the line after it... both of them really set the whole mood of the poem.

[Tigi]

I love the way this poem rhythms, and tells a story at the same time! I like the first two lines, and the line about 'Pain' and the line after it... both of them really set the whole mood of the poem.