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Stars shining bright
You called me that night
You said we need to talk
I'm thinking of you as i walk....
I saw you in the park
Alone in the dark
You're tears were falling
While we were talking....
The stars were fading
And the rain began pouring
I hear the words goodbye
As you left me by....
- by granddark94 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/02/2009 |
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- Title: goodbye",
- Artist: granddark94
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Description:
it's a simple poem about...
break up......
if you read the poem...
you will know the explanation.... - Date: 03/02/2009
- Tags: goodbye
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Comments (3 Comments)
- emo skater__gurl2114 - 03/11/2010
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it's good
it rhyms so it's not the kind i normaly read
not all poem's need to rhym but it was still good - Report As Spam
- ll-lil_tom-ll - 03/04/2009
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it's a good poem...
actually i could relate that poem to myself...
tnx for writing the poem......
even if it's not for me... - Report As Spam
- Cloffing Pempslider - 03/02/2009
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"Stars shining bright
You called me that night"
ROFL.
I stopped reading there.
1 star. - Report As Spam
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