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I see you everyday,
But I can't think of anything to say.
Every once in a while I look at you,
And my heart hops around like a kangaroo.
If only I could feel your touch,
But I know that that's asking for too much.
Still I wish you would notice me,
Even though I don't compare to thee.
- by NinjaCondom |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/07/2009 |
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- Title: You.
- Artist: NinjaCondom
- Description: A little poem I thought of during class yesterday. It's a bit cheesy. Tell me what you think.
- Date: 03/07/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Cloffing Pempslider - 03/14/2009
- It's dumb and not funny.
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- Madderbie - 03/08/2009
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I think it's could. Rhyming words are like a beat to a poem
Gives it rythm. It's a wittle cheasy, but cheasy never hurt a poem. :] Good Job. - Report As Spam