Mental Choke

• Artist: meizha
• Description: Everybody hates writers block.
  
  Live up to the vision of the arena. Please rate, comment, or whatever. =)
• Date: 03/25/2009
• Tags: mental choke writersblock

In this deep but narrow valley of my plain vocabulary
I am caught and trapped and drowning in the floodwork of my mind.
And there is no rhyme nor rhythm to keep my words in a system,
and this weakness is a murder of my sighing pleading mind.
For no words to keep me guided,
and no means to keep me bound
to my soul's poetic ground,
is to keep my vision blinded.
And to keep my thoughts imprisoned is to keep my pen confined;
Therefore, no growth in my mind.
With my freedom compromised, there breathes no heart in my mind.

Comments

[meizha]

Exactly. The problem though is not everyone reads our entries and don't really give a heck. So I guess it's just people like us who gotta help each other.

[cooll666725]

Wow! Extremely good! I'm glad that you think that we should be able to write and expect encouragement. Even if someone's work isn't that good, it shouldn't be rated poorly without an explanation. Constructive criticism people. Anyway, great poem! 5/5 Definitely!!!

[meizha]

Hehe. Thanks.

[UC Poika]

Good for a writer's block poem