The Angel of the Night

• Artist: i K a r e o k e K a t
• Description: This means more than any of you could ever know............
• Date: 04/03/2009
• Tags: angel emos night love

I have no soul
I have no life
But your my Love
You Angel of the
Night.

You're dark
Mysterious and my
One and only Love
You Angel of the
Night.

The dark wings of
You, sweep past my face
My world means nothing
You Angel of the
Night.

I hope you are taking care
of my delicate heart,
I am reaching for yours
You Angel of the
Night.

We are two feet apart
But I feel like we're
Thousands of feet apart
You Angel of the
Night.

Some black gloves reach for you,
My hands warmed inside them
I grip your arm but
You slip away,
Oh Angel of the Night.

I learned from you
I lost because of you
I got dumber because of you
I won because of you,
You're the Most Beautiful
Angel of the Night.

Love me,
You Angel
Love me
All you can
Be MY love,
You angel....
Of.....
The Night.

Comments

[Emerald Charm]

This had potential, but it fell short. I like the repetition, but it was too...repetitive. If you're going to do something like that, try to make the stanza's longer. "You angle of the night" takes up nearly half the poem, and it get's boring reading that line again and again without more content in between. Also, in the first stanza, you spelled "You're", "Your", but that's the only time you did it. the other times were fine.

3/5

[i K a r e o k e K a t]

So i hope you all like it