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Why do you listen to his lies?
I hear these cries!
All I can say is....
You shouldent be his!
Your Trying to smile.
But falling into a pile.
You say you love him.
But he says he loves a girl named Kim.
Now you cry....
As you lye.....
Infront of me!
So please be with me...?
- by Emo_Slash22 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/07/2009 |
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- Title: "As I Lay"
- Artist: Emo_Slash22
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Description:
still a lil short sorry
hopefully inspiring. - Date: 04/07/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- DandiiBrandii - 12/18/2010
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Oh come on pain killer do you have to be so harsh? jeez the nerve of some people here
Sorry I thought it was a beautiful poem hun biggrin - Report As Spam
- Pain-Killer 4 Dead Angels - 04/10/2009
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That was horrible. Work on your rhythm, your rhyme scheme-
so it makes more sense and it doesn't look like your just dishing
random things out. - Report As Spam
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